rate_review Reviews

Oh my shit. That was good! Loved it!

Holy crap! I really have to see this movie to understand what it is about Tristan to provoke such a hot hot fic. I was trolling for some Le Chiffre and wandered here. Good thing I did.

This was great. Nice build-up and climax. Excellent language and style.

This is really really good. You drag the reader into Tristan's arms with you and let her feel what it would be like to be taken by a Knight so feral that none but you know him. There are a couple of minor technical errors and I have only ONE quibble. Mads' eyes are the colour of old gold coins, the colour of honey dripping from the honeycomb. I know for sure since I was examining his face carefully while talking to him with an eye to improving my scribbled portraits of him. They really look like the golden eyes of a hawk or an eagle with that piercing way of SEEING you.
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P.S. The girls in kingarthurfanfiction yahoo group would REALLY love this story. If you're not a member, please come join and post more stuff like this!