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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Please update soon! I'm almost dying of suspence here!!! lol!
~Linwé
~Linwé
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope you are able to continue with this story. I have followed it all the way through and am enjoying it very much. I was quite unhappy when I read your last post about losing all the chapters! Good luck with it, and I'll be watching for more posts.
Ashla
Ashla
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you take down several chapters? I thought the point was to add chapters as time progresses. lol. I hope things reappear soon.
- Rachel
- Rachel
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Rachel, where is the rest of the chapters? I hope they are up there soon!!!
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter that I read just keeps getting better and better. It's really amazing. I feel treated to read your work.
I have a strong hunch that you're going to establish a situation that has Padme able to kill Darth Vader while he feels totally devoted to her....and I'm really hoping that Padme doesn't go through with her plans. Hasn't this couple been through enough trama and anguish?
Can't wait for you next chapter. I'll check in regularly.
Till then...
- Rachel
I have a strong hunch that you're going to establish a situation that has Padme able to kill Darth Vader while he feels totally devoted to her....and I'm really hoping that Padme doesn't go through with her plans. Hasn't this couple been through enough trama and anguish?
Can't wait for you next chapter. I'll check in regularly.
Till then...
- Rachel
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and post. Poor Si-Nia, I can't believe that he murdered her children in cold blood like that. I know she must feel true hate. I don't think that Anakin can be redeemed, Padme is right, he has to die. He is definitely too evil to live.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so fantastic and heartbreaking at the same time. I am so glad that Anakin realized that his love for Padme outweighed his anger towards her. Can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was gut-wrenching. Vader is an evil dog and deserves everything he gets. But, at the same time, as I said in my last review, I am having a difficult time not feeling for him. He is going through pure agony.
You wrote that beautifully, especially from Vader's point-of-view. You do a marvelous job of making me feel his incredible pain and confusion.
This story is just so sad because it cannot end well for anyone. (Sad in a good way [as she tries to smile].)
You wrote that beautifully, especially from Vader's point-of-view. You do a marvelous job of making me feel his incredible pain and confusion.
This story is just so sad because it cannot end well for anyone. (Sad in a good way [as she tries to smile].)
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can we get another chapter ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so awesone and completely addictive.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You ended the chapter there? You're as evil as Vader. Absolutely loving the twist here. Post the next chapter soon.