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for Forget Me Not

by Ladykohl

person Doreen
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww man. Don't leave us hangin like that. Update soon.
person jeannie
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...i don't even know what to say....that was so intense. i really didn't expect anakin/vader to react that way. write more!
person vanessa
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was just awesome, I can't wait to read more !!! :)
person Busanda
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It should be next to impossible to feel any sympathy for Vader, yet I somehow have managed it. I find it horrible to watch him deal with the inner conflict that he is experiencing. He is inflicting terrible pain and destruction on those around him, but equally upon himself. Clearly, a part of him is desperate for someone to save him from this personal torture. He is living trapped in a hell of his own creation, which he attempts to justify and condone, with no apparent way out.

I have never been a big Obi-wan fan, and I did not expect much more than what I saw from him.

And, it was actually very brave of Padme to try what she did, but then, of course, she doesn’t have much to lose at this point anyway. She is living a lonely life on an out-of-the-way planet, isolated from her family and friends, separated from her children, all under the guise that it is for the good of the galaxy. She has sacrificed so much already, she is probably not afraid to sacrifice her life at this point. She is at least willing to throw herself in there and to try to make a difference -- unfortunately, Vader truly feels betrayed and abandoned by her and is not in a forgiving mood. She needs to re-think her approach -- she’s not dealing with a rational human at this point and trying to make a Dark Lord of the Sith with hurt feelings see reason is only going to make him mad.

This is a good, old-fashioned tragedy. I love it!
person Sierra
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please tell me you're going to update soon!!!! I really want to know what's going to happen, this is definitely one of the best fics on this site, that I've read. I want so bad to see Anakin and Padme happy again...but after all he's done I doubt it. You write the emotions so well, all the pain and confusion, it is so sad--exactly the way I like to read a story!

KEEP IT UP!
person kate
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Padme has rather underestimated her husband's insanity. She should have listened to Obi-Wan, but then, since when does she listen to anyone? Doing the reasonable thing is not a Skywalker trait. I hope what's-her-name doesn't actually kill Padme, though even if she tried, she wouldn't get very far, I don't think. She doesn't look too healthy. And I hope her children are OK, though I'm getting the feeling that they're not. Can't wait for the next update!
person Dar
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Do not leave me hanging like this. I love this story, and hope you update VERY SOON!!
person doloris
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read every review of this story and it seems like you got a lot of fans who loves your story including "Time Retreating."
I am one of your fans, or course, and I say this, UPDATE ASAP WE ARE ALL DYING HERE!!!
person vanessa
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story. I can't wait to read more. I really like the " padme lookalike" character. I hope she will continue to play an important part in your story. Please update soon ;)
person Linwe_Amari
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEE! Update?