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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She finally reunited with her children, that's so cute. It seems to me that Anakin/Vader has a change of heart a little
bit. You're doing an awesome job, please update soon!!!
bit. You're doing an awesome job, please update soon!!!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never review these stories but Oh my gosh I had to review this one.
You have succeeded in making each persons emotions come jumping out of the page at you. I can almost grab Vader's anger with my hand. That is awesome to me. Thanks for being such an excellent writer.
Oh and can I beg you to please not stop writing Time Retreating. I read that one last night and I did not think it was wierd. It is awesome. It sent chills up and down my back.
You have succeeded in making each persons emotions come jumping out of the page at you. I can almost grab Vader's anger with my hand. That is awesome to me. Thanks for being such an excellent writer.
Oh and can I beg you to please not stop writing Time Retreating. I read that one last night and I did not think it was wierd. It is awesome. It sent chills up and down my back.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update soon!
~Katie
~Katie
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh boyb this is getting good.l write more
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you portray the characters. I'm glad (I can't remember her name) isn't stupid enough to fall in love with her rapist. Her emotions are very vividly portrayed and realistic, as are Vaders. I feel so sorry for them both, even though he's despicable.
I especially loved the last few chapters. Bye-bye, Emperor Palpatine. I'm glad Anakin/Vader killed him-and I like how it was partially in revenge and partially to save his son.
I especially loved the last few chapters. Bye-bye, Emperor Palpatine. I'm glad Anakin/Vader killed him-and I like how it was partially in revenge and partially to save his son.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome. I absolutely love it. Can't wait to see what Vader does to Si-Nia. I have a feeling it won't be anything nice.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that he killed his master, but I am more scared of what he will do to the slave girl.
I hope he has mercy for her. Love the story, please update soon!!!
I hope he has mercy for her. Love the story, please update soon!!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I just can not express in words the emotions I am feeling. Raw, tense and potent.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please update!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god... he is going to find luke!! does that mean that he will kill owen and baru? oh i cant wait for you to update!! i absolutely love this story, it is definitely one of the best star wars fan fics!