rate_review Reviews

Well I really like your story, even through it always makes me sad, poor Anakin and Padme ::sob::

Maybe those person that leave you a bad review don't like angst or dark fics, I don't know but if they give you a comment they should explain or not write you at all.

bye

dm

Don't listen to the flamers. Your story is wonderful. It's well written and the emotions/angst is portrayed perfectly.

Chance:
I don't know who's flaming you...I love this story. I check for updates every single day. My ONLY complaint is that it doesn't get updated fast enough. Your writing style flows very well, and I think that you are articulating Anakin/Vader's struggle VERY well. I'd like to see him confirm the kids are his...I mean WE have DNA testing & haven't invented a warp drive.
I did want to ask...when were the two little kids murdered. I'd sure like to see that turn out to be a mistake on their mother's part. Sort of a cruel joke on Vader's part. I have a funny reaction any time kids or dogs are killed maliciously. That's about the only thing that MIGHT have turned me off of this story...but I was holding on to see if maybe Vader made her THINK he'd killed the kids. That was his one big trump card with her, and you can't undo it once it's done.

I must say that I am enjoying this story. The conflict in Vader is very believable, and although he does terrible things, he doesn't seem to be completely evil. Ignore the flames and write more soon!

i like and dislike this story really i like it but anakin/vader's indesisviness is kinda getting to me also id like obi back in the picture for a bit there it seemed they might reconsile.

Snow

Very sad, moving chapter. I love the juxtaposition.

YOU SAID IT CHANCE!!! TELL IT LIKE IT IS!!! LOL

What a sad comparison! Between Anakin's little daydream and what really happened with him and Padme. I wonder why he didn't just beg for forgiveness like he obviusly wanted to, though I suppose maybe his pride is preventing something like that. I don't know, but while I'm not convinced he's past the point of redemption, I think he's gone past the point of where Padme could forgive him. Doing what he did (no spoilers! lol) most likely pushed her past that.

MORE???

I have been following this story from the beginning and I am finally taking the time to review. The story is so dark and haunting. The pain both Anakin and Padmé are going through makes it a very difficult read. I fear that there will be no happy ending to this piece. You feel so sorry for both of them as well as Si-Nia, who is truly the innocent in all of this. I both anticipate and dread the remaining chapters.

well you have managed to smah me again. I truly thought the dream sequence was the real thing. Then that last sentence just kills you. Why can't he just make his drream come true. He could in heartbeat if he just tried.