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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please continue or I shall be very sad!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait! There's only one chapter here, I think there must be something wrong. This can't be all there is, you realise I need more, right?
Seriously though, finish this. It's rare that I see fan fiction written well enough for me to actually enjoy it.
Seriously though, finish this. It's rare that I see fan fiction written well enough for me to actually enjoy it.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is superb; I apologize for leaving another comment but I forgot to mention a few things. I love how you gave them both a tender side, that while they maintained a level of sadism in their personalities and relationship, there was no denying a connection between them. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to read more!
PS- White hair, eh? Rockin' ;)
PS- White hair, eh? Rockin' ;)
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Can't wait to read more. Really enjoyed this- you have a knack for words. Very eloquent.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! So happy you decided to continue your original story! Looking forward to reading some more, you got me hooked!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy shit! I love this. I stumbled across Part 1 of the series a couple days ago and DAMN WOMAN! You've got me hooked. I just have to say, thank god you gave him something close to love atleast on Jonathan's part. For a second it seemed like he was completely and utterly cruel and manipulating..... I guess he is to a certain extent, but even crazy people have hearts. A good example are those people that slaughter their famalies and cry later saying Satan forced them to do it.