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for In the Heart of a Warrior

by JulieL

person Spider
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BTW I can spell just not on paper
person Courtney
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!!! i loved it. all of it. could you, by any chance, add and add more more more???? PLEASE
person Anna
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!!!!! I can't wait to read what will happen next. Keep it up, and update soon!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story and i cant wait til you update it!!!
person circle of addictions
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I laughed through out the whole chapter! Kelly getting a mic check from a Yautja LOL
Please update soon. I can't wait for her to find out who he really is!
person Renee
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love it write more fast and soon
person Anna
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again a excellent chapter. I'm on edge wondering when Kelly will find out they there are her friends. I'm also wondering what will happen next. Keep up the excellent work. I am looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!!!
person Kae'She
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please dot delete this story i think you have a great start so please dont delete it or i will be very say and start to cry
person shortest_warrior
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the confusion, I wasn't going to delete this one, it is my other story Little gift from the Gods it was thinking of deleting. Sorry.
person Anna
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!! I found a few grammatical errors, but I enjoyed reading it all the same. Whatever you do DON'T DELETE THIS STORY!!!!! I look everyday to see if you have updated it. I find it interesting to read, and you have me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next. Please continue with this story. I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work!