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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep the updates coming! I am really into this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to hit the net!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, it was really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that was funny! Good work
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Good job!
update again soon, it's really intresting
update again soon, it's really intresting
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Now I must have more. I will perish without more! MORE! Keep up the great work. I really, really like this story. I check for updates like 4 times a day! Can't wait.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Please update soon
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is that it?
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was cute. please continue i am interested in what will happen next
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry ^^;; The Chapter was cut off for a second and I thought you only had a paragraph.
Anyway, I like this chapter!
Anyway, I like this chapter!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The concept for the story is amazing. But you might want to go back and edit. Some of it was hard for me to understand, mostly due to grammar. Don't feel bad though, my grammar sucks far worse. Anyway, you might want to go back and reword some of the story and give it more vocabulary. Like the word whore, I'm not saying you shouldn't write it, I just think you shouldn't use it over and over again. But this your story and not mine. Thanks for sharing and I like the story, I'm sure you will improve.