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for In the Heart of a Warrior

by JulieL

person Silent_void
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooohhh! This is getting good!
person Millen Stryker
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes head* The government just won't leave the Preds alone, will they? I hope you continue to write this good fic. I can't wait to fing out what happens afterward.
person Silent_Void
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Funny Wavy Man
person Chancelor22
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UH OH! I smell government scum coming into the picture. Good chappy. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Silent_Void
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter
person Chancelor22
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! It took me a minute to get that he is telling a story. Don't you just love annoying little brothers?! Well, another good chappy...still leading up to something...really good I hope. Can't wait to read.
person dragon85
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up!!
person Silent_Void
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Interesting. Update please, this is good
person circle of addictions
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great! good job!!! cant wait for more
person Chancelor22
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HHUUMM??!! This could really be something. I hope that you update soon...I am really interested in where this is going. And don't worry, there were not too many errors.