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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ani, well done; another great chapter. I've always enjoyed your stories - they have a level of maturity to them that separates them from others (and i'm not talking about the naughty bits either!) Also love Jack's intensity. Brilliant. If i were Celia, at this point i would have completely melted into a little puddle on the cabin floor. Please keep the chapters coming...
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do absolutely the best characterization of Jack that I have read so far...... Bravo!!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Poor Celia. I'm thinking she should just give in gracefully to Jack.... but then she wouldn't be Celia would she? Have a great holiday!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story darling.
love it
love it
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the moral tug o' war Celia and Jack are struggling with. The perfect yin-yang. And I like Jack's edge a lot - a pirate shouldn't be too good, eh? Well, the children have been neglected and it's time I came back to reality - thanks for trip. Post again soon - I can't wait to return to the aquamarine bliss with the good Captain.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This has been a nice few minutes. Two chapters of absolute heaven! Looking forward to more when you can.... tomorrow? winks hopefully.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chappie but 2 problems - it's too short and took waaaay too long to get posted!! You really should consider posting daily. Your humble fans would be eternally grateful for the fix. Thank you again *bowing deeply while flourishing an extended arm*.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bah, leaving us on ANOTHER cliffie?! Great chapter, wonder what will happen to Celia...heheh. Update with a new chapter as soon as possible please.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGGGGH!!!!! Damn you woman! Get the next chapter up double quick! I know I left a hanger but this.... this isn't a cliffhanger - this is bloody murder! (Even if I do know)
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the cage with YOU, Ani Sparrow!!! Leaving us hanging again - for shame. But it's worth it. Another great chapter added to an enticing story. Please keep writing - it keeps getting better. Just need more now. Wonderful!