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for Saints and Sinners

by JennyPugh

person ducky007
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing...as always...when are you planning to update? I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
person Jaque
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wa..ha...waaa. speachless...but why did you leave it there!!! suspense...please please keep going!
person Miss.Sparrow
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, don't stop now! The tension is killing us all! UPDATE SOOON!
person Michiru Kaiou
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh it's getting kinky... i like it :) but i always like your stories
person PirateAurora
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's even better now that the plot is getting more exciting and full of tension. Yay!!! Please keep writing more. I was also re-reading the original jack/jenny fic and i think bits are missing from the database corruption - paragraphs here and there. Still rocks though.
person Lore
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YO MUST FINISH SAINTS AND SINNERS ASAP KK THANKS BYE
person Miss.Sparrow
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Hehe.. poor Celia! I wonder what happens next? Update soon!
person Boshomengro
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've certainly set Jack up for the fall, but did he do it I wonder?
Don't leave us wondering for too long please, but then you already know my little addicition to pirate captains.
person Mari
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, Ani, I am in love with your story. I should have known that you would be churning out some good writing, I believe I saw your name referenced to by the author of "The Map".. you are her beta, are you not? Or maybe I just imagined that.

I just love how fresh this story is, there is such a modern humor in it, I love all of the sarcasm.
The scene with Jack and the rest of the pirates going to one of the girl's services was hilarious, I was rolling on the floor laughing.

And this exchange: "“Really, Captain?” Celia enquired, her voice dripping with sarcasm. “It sounded to me as if you were dancing with cannonballs strapped to your feet.”

“I’ll strap bloody cannonballs to your feet in a minute,” Jack muttered, shooting a dark look towards the side cabin.

“What did you say?” came her icy voice."

Hysterical!!!!

I love it, in case you can't tell. Hope you get the next chapter up extremely extremely soon.
person Miss.Sparrow
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahoy! Things are beginning to get interesting here! Good luck finding a beta reader!