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for Things I can do for You

by hanaretakunai

schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you really must continue this! It's nice and flowing story with only minor spelling mistakes :]
person Savvy
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Your "i" that were supposed to be "I" kinda irritated me but they didn't draw away from the good plot. Keep writing this because it's very good.
person sylver
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is nice
i hope 2 see more of it
person Dark Avenger
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you intend to continue with this! I really want to know what will happen next. ^_^
person Cassie
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I love your story! The way you write is amazing!! It has great detail to it and they way you do pov's is awesome I actually feel like I'm in his head!! I hope to read lots more soon!! ^__~
person Totchi-kun
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! You really need to write more! Onegai? It would be highly appreciated. It's nice to find a story that makes them seem like men and not sappy guys, ya know? I think you do an excellent job at portraying them! Demo what do I know, right? lol. WRITE MORE!
person Megan
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!!!! You must continue soon!!! I keep checking it everyday!!! Don't let your fan down!!! Nice job on the characters as well!!!
person SPUG
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MEEP! I love it! Hyde and Gackt make the PERFECT couple! Hope you keep going! You're a good writer! ^_^