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for Tequila Heat

by LSMarz

schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't stand this pairing.

Haha, that having been said, I'll compliment you, now. The imagery is wonderful, very easily pictured, and you're very good at descriptions. They were also pretty damn in character for this being so un-canon (c'mon, they'd never fuck each other. Sheldon's sexuality might be questionable, but El...?) and I actually enjoyed it. Nice style ^^.

And I love the last line. He would so totally say that XD.
person Gee
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good prose, I'd like to see you write something longer...great sensery poetry with stuning visuals. Gee
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niiiice... ho-o-ot... I can feel that desert heat myself.
Detailing all the different tactile sensations, is a very nice vehicle to hang a story on, IMO!
person sandssavvy
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
... I think I need a cold shower now...