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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is enchanting. It's so well done and nothing is hurried, you're taking the time to make us care about the fates of the characters and that Thomas kid gives me the shivers!
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that really sucks! There aren't that many stories as worthy as this one and I should know because I've read a lot of crap. I hope you will eventually come back to this story and personally I don't find anything remotely wrong with how you've portrayed Toby after all he was for a short time a member to the Fae world abd that would mature anyone beyong their years. I especially like the mutual jealousy that Jareth and Toby share; totally understandable on both sides.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I bet he's going to be REALLLLLY torqued when he hears about 'Thomas'. heh
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A Sister Complex. Hmm. I can't see a way out of this. I hope to see it to the end.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how you present Jareth, both in power, nature, and the effect of events on him... I'm glad the Labyrinth's not ruined.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sarah has grown up. I forgot to mention how gleeful I was that she put that little manipulating 'boy' in his place. A rivalry between a near immortal being and a five year old. Oy. Is there a middle ground somewhere?
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
His time in the Labyrinth would change anyone. Toby shouldn't be expected to act how a five year old normally would. Because he, and his sister, are not normal. Thankfully. I look forward to when you find the will to continue this. Would it help if I challenged you to? ;)
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you're still working on this story. I know it's difficult to sit down and do a rewrite, especially when you have other stories going, but this is a truly wonderful story. It completely pulled me in, and it's so difficult for me to find good stories for this movie. Please. please say you're still working on this one.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you intend to update?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...ok, I forgive you. :P
please continue when u can.
Great story.
The Glacemers are funny. =LOL= I know such people.
please continue when u can.
Great story.
The Glacemers are funny. =LOL= I know such people.