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for Hungry Eyes

by Tsume

schedule May 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. I've been a huge 10th Kingdom fan since my teenage years when it aired on TV and was delighted to find a fic about it. My only compliant is that I would have liked details on what happened after Virginia's strip-tease. I felt like that scene really built up the sexual tension and anticipation, so it was a bit disappointing to get the "fade to black" sort of ending. Typically, people read the stories on this site because they WANT details. So that might be something to keep in mind when writing your next fic. Overall, good job. I really liked it.
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I freaking loved this!!!

Um...yeah, I'd kinda love to do this to Wolf too. Think Virginia would share for a night?

LOL
person LyeLye
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was cute and all, but a bit too tame for my taste, not enough detail either. I liked it though, just not what im used to.
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I like this, because it's a 10th Kingdom fic and I was looking for one. I think you have both characters in-character, especially Wolf. He would totally say "creamy, dreamy wife!" hahaha.

It was racy and sexy, but I wanted more detail. Definitely good for starts, though! :D
person oxcab
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool ^_^ the 10th kingdom is my fav' movie ^_^ and W/V are my fav' pairing ^_^
person Michi
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! it's sweet and cute and sexy! I only wish I could find and read more stories on those two! ^_^ Considering I just rewatched the whole thing. ^^ Although... I would love to see something... NC-17 with those two... like maybe the details of their hide and go seek game.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good - can u plz do a story on acorn/virginia or wolf/virginia chase scence.
person KonekoMia
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really good!!! Please write more 10th Kindom fanfics, please....? *Puppy dog eyes*

~KonekoMia~
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha thats ace man ace i liked it yeaaaaaah and the vesuvious Finky knows whats down and whats up and whats inbetween baby.

i love the 10th kingom man its great but loooooooooong and you gotta watch it in sections or it gets borrrrrring

okay yeah well bye then

keep it gangsta
person Fallen Firefly
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* I enjoyed this fic. As a true Wolf/Virginia lover, I'm glad to find a cute fic about them. Nice work.