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LOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!! U rock! Keep it up

Ah interspecies love. Hope you continue with this. It's really great. More character descriptions would be cool.

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This is possibly the sweetest and most delightful piece of erotic fiction I've ever read. I found the parts where you delve deeply into Tya's character and subconscious very well-written, and the sheer physicality and sensuality of the characters (not just the sex or foreplay, but things like how Tya inhales D'gon's scent to verify that it's him) really helped to make them more than words on a screen depicting an act of frenzied interspecies fucking. I'm admittedly not a very big fan of Stargate TV series (though I enjoyed the movie) and had to look up articles on wikipedia to fully appreciate the references once I got down to a second reading, but your interlacing of the Stargate SG-1 and Predator settings really did help round the story out. This is one story I really enjoyed reading and re-reading, and I'm certain I'll be coming back to revisit it a lot.

Well, there is a sister. Lol, possible sequel eh? ROFL.

I have had read alot of stories on here and this is the best 1 yet please for love of god use preds and sg1 some more and make tons of new sequals and chapters your the best writer on here,keep up the good work dude.=)=)=)

Man you are a good story writer please a seqaule to this one oh great one,you khow how to keep the suspensr running 100%.=)

Great story can't wait for the next update :)

MORE PLEASE!!

Ohh, getting hot... You tease. =D I like it. I really look forward to the next chapter.

That was good! More please!!