rate_review Reviews

Very sweet love story. I loved it. Well done, you *smiles*

Good story, very good story.

I think the best part of the story... was when she reminded him to breathe and his response was, "I think I've forgotten how to."

I don't know why but that was so sweet, so innocent, yet everything good that I felt teary eyed.

That was one of the most innocent (yet yummy) love scenes I've ever ridden that didn't kill the desire, yet described it in a way that very few people will ever experience. So yeah, this fluffy story just hit a button I didn't know existed in me.

I have to say Bernard is one of the few characters in the movie that I actually caught a crush on and you captured his personality wonderfully and he deserved a good companion by his side.

Yeah. *fans self* Well off to read more stories. I'm saving this to computer so my mom can read it. She is obsessed with this movie.

I love this story and I can't wait to see where it goes. I loved Bernard in The Santa Clause and I like the story concept, especially the bit with cupid not being able to affect magical beings. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I love this story. I think it is very well written and the way to develop the characters is great but I would like to know a little bit more about Serena, ya know just little things ya know and this is not a flame just a suggestion other then that this is a great story please upday soon I would love to read what happens next and I hope Bernard comes around