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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Just wanted to say that I liked the 'kitten' nickname he gave her. I thought it was really cute. ^^ Loved the story! A bit short, but still very good. I was a little concerned at first, about the length of the chapters, but it all turned out great. And... I think there could be a good sequal to this. Just an idea. I know it's hard to write sequels and it's usually better to just leave it be, but I think a sequal for this would definately fit. ~Hatori~
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done! The best I've read yet.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was so hot, Jareth was completly in character!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never read this pairing before - or this group, even though I'm a HUGE FAN! I just have to say that despite some small nitpicky writing things, the characterization of Jareth is UNPRESCIDENTED. I want to read more of your Jareth. Much, much more! Bravo. :)
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really well done and insightful i think. I love Jareth and Sarah just seemed to... whiny? but you explained that and i think portrayed the characters really well... plus of course, good lemon...
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think for a short story your writing was really interesting... you should add on to it.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.
My.
Gosh.
*screams*
That was the most awesomest (is that even a word?) Labyrinth fic I've ever read.
Woot. *fans self*
I'd like to see more of it. :)
Very good job. *claps*
My.
Gosh.
*screams*
That was the most awesomest (is that even a word?) Labyrinth fic I've ever read.
Woot. *fans self*
I'd like to see more of it. :)
Very good job. *claps*
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good! is there a sequel or a next chapter on the way soon? i hope there is because i liked both the plot and the smut!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A refreshing take on Jareth! Not sappy love besotted...a nice change of pace!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!! that was awesome!! you should write more!