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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really hot and twisted...wow...
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually write reviews, but this was so good. The mood was absolutely electric. I loved the way you characterized Jareth. I'm definitely going to look up all the other stuff you've written.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Bravo. *stands and applauds* Your wiring was wonderful and the description was awesome. I truley enjoyed reading this story. I think you should continue it, because I know there is so much more you want to write. I am happy that you took the time to draw it out, and I am also happy with the way it ended. Now, I don't like the fact that Sarah is such a lucky little bitch... but, we all have to dream... right??
A job well done.
Kittenn
A job well done.
Kittenn
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truly can't think of anything being wrong with this. I'm sure if I went over it with a fine comb I'd find *something*, but it's too good a story to spoil with petty complaints. And it truly is good. Most of the Sarah/Jareth stories are just PWPs, but this had a sense of actually fitting in well with the film. I think you had both characters down perfectly *smiles dreamily at arrogant Jareth* so great job!
~Loki
~Loki