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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Even his own culture understood the concept of 'slang' but was comparing their sexual organs to a male chicken really appealing to Ooman females?" Hehe totally cracked me up. Being Swedish I have wondered this myself from time to time. Suppose it may have something to do with rising early...
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooo now this should prove interesting
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hn' well this was beyond interesting i can't wait to read the next chap
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very sexy! I am sincerely glad my friend recommended this to me... the best PWP I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
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~ Shay
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~ Shay
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi, are you going to have one of the chapters having word spread around to the male predator's that never mate being informed about the female humans being compatible for mating and that there is a lot more then the female predator's!! please write more soon! I really can't wait what you come up with next! Are there going to be any births of hybrids?
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I have to say I don't really go in for slash -- too decidedly hetero -- but I was hooked after the first chapter. I decided to post a review here, as opposed to under "More Possibilities," because the points I address in the review are all found in this fic.
I like that you've taken the time to delve into the vagaries of Yautja sociobiology -- if Yautja really live as long as fanon indicates, and they have all these females competing for the males and getting gravid after every mating season, then why haven't they populated the entire galaxy or, for that matter, collapsed from a Malthusian catastrophe as population overran resources?
Your idea of a limited number of breeding females sitting at the top of the social hierarchy makes the whole situation more plausible, and the large numbers of males, many of whom will die trying to find a trophy to impress a female (i.e., removing himself from the gene pool) makes the concept of Yautja society a little more believable, not to mention giving the horny unrequited monsters a reason to look for companionship outside their immediate species. As well as giving a convincing justification for the yaoi. :))
I find it refreshing that the female lead, Sam, is not a warrior or linguist or any kind of super-female. Her very lack of any potential Mary-Sue-ish qualities makes her endearing, and the story that much more interesting and entertaining. It makes her more the girl-next-door (especially with the braids), albeit a sexually adventurous girl-next-door who's into interspecies sex.
I could wish for a little more detail when it comes to what Sam is doing / what is going on with her; for example, during my first read of Chapter 2 I was under the impression that she'd stayed asleep all throughout the scene with Kir; a few lines indicating that her eyes were open or that she had exchanged looks with one of her lovers (which is only natural) would have clarified this. I realize that this is mostly due to your using Kir as your POV character.
There are also things alluded to that I feel would have rounded out the story a bit more, such as "the talk" that Sam wanted to have with Kir and Salek. While she clearly has some sort of emotional attachment to the two Yautja, a little exploration into how exactly she felt waking up having interspecies sex or why she was so accepting of the two sexually would have rounded out her character more. At this point she comes across as a little flat in the characterization.
All in all, though, I found this piece a fun and enjoyable read. I will probably post a review, too, on "More Possibilities" after I've reread it. Thanks, and I hope you continue to write.
I like that you've taken the time to delve into the vagaries of Yautja sociobiology -- if Yautja really live as long as fanon indicates, and they have all these females competing for the males and getting gravid after every mating season, then why haven't they populated the entire galaxy or, for that matter, collapsed from a Malthusian catastrophe as population overran resources?
Your idea of a limited number of breeding females sitting at the top of the social hierarchy makes the whole situation more plausible, and the large numbers of males, many of whom will die trying to find a trophy to impress a female (i.e., removing himself from the gene pool) makes the concept of Yautja society a little more believable, not to mention giving the horny unrequited monsters a reason to look for companionship outside their immediate species. As well as giving a convincing justification for the yaoi. :))
I find it refreshing that the female lead, Sam, is not a warrior or linguist or any kind of super-female. Her very lack of any potential Mary-Sue-ish qualities makes her endearing, and the story that much more interesting and entertaining. It makes her more the girl-next-door (especially with the braids), albeit a sexually adventurous girl-next-door who's into interspecies sex.
I could wish for a little more detail when it comes to what Sam is doing / what is going on with her; for example, during my first read of Chapter 2 I was under the impression that she'd stayed asleep all throughout the scene with Kir; a few lines indicating that her eyes were open or that she had exchanged looks with one of her lovers (which is only natural) would have clarified this. I realize that this is mostly due to your using Kir as your POV character.
There are also things alluded to that I feel would have rounded out the story a bit more, such as "the talk" that Sam wanted to have with Kir and Salek. While she clearly has some sort of emotional attachment to the two Yautja, a little exploration into how exactly she felt waking up having interspecies sex or why she was so accepting of the two sexually would have rounded out her character more. At this point she comes across as a little flat in the characterization.
All in all, though, I found this piece a fun and enjoyable read. I will probably post a review, too, on "More Possibilities" after I've reread it. Thanks, and I hope you continue to write.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read your Andromeda stories, and decided to go looking for more of your work.
This wasn't really something I had really considered. I have read a few stories with relationships between predators and humans but none of them really seemed to put much thought into the mechanics.
A really interesting story, very imaginative scenes, and a huge tease of an ending. Of course since you already started the sequel......
This wasn't really something I had really considered. I have read a few stories with relationships between predators and humans but none of them really seemed to put much thought into the mechanics.
A really interesting story, very imaginative scenes, and a huge tease of an ending. Of course since you already started the sequel......
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how many times I have read this fic. I absolutely love it! Are you going to continue it? I know that you had only planned on a few chapters...but it really is very good. And I wouldn't mind seeing what the new guy gets into! Pun intended! ;)
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Deron is seeing all the possibilities LOL. Please gotta read how he'll manage to woo an Human female(s). Will he get more attention then he can handle? Will Sam go with them? What will happen if she made the trip with Salek and Kir to the next yautja gathering? Will yautja females show up to claim their wayward males from these creatures? I can't wait to read more! Please update soon.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O' how I love this story...let me count the ways. I do so hope that you will continue to write this fic. I have read it multiple times and still love it. And if you do decide not to continue with this one, I hope that you will write another. I don't think I could live without your awesome works!!