rate_review Reviews

okay i have to say this...i love ur stories!!! i have just zoomed through the first two and now this one. they are soo good! like wow. wish jack was a little more like kyra from the movies, but different story line. no biggie. love it all though! im soo hooked!

i hope you update soon and finish this story!!! :D just love it all!

take care!

I am so loving this story! I really hope to see an update one day (hopefully soon) I gotta know what happens.

The suspence is killing me!!!!!!!! I feel kinda pethetic really, Im almost as despret for Riddick to find Jack as he is and Im not even in his situation.

Anyway..... This is a very good series so far. please continue

Oh my gosh! You can't stop there! Please write fast and update soon, I'm loving this story! :)

omg! please finish this! It's so awesome...(frantic reader wringing hands)...must know what happens, must know!

Hi, I love this fic, I was wondering if you have any more of it, I'm addicted. Many thanks

I have to say when I first started to read this series I stopped midway through because I thought you had Riddick act a bit OOC with his taking Jack. But as I read through all the other stories in the section I realized that there wasn't really too many other options out there, so I went back to reading. I am glad I did, the level that you weaved the two of them together to the story and the bond that was slowly forming was very intriguing. I also loved the torn emotions shown with Riddick fighting his nature to consummate Jack with any means and his want to wait and allow her to offer herself up to him. I was on edge in the last series when Riddick came to the edge of raping Jack, but at the last minute remembered who he was, so to speak and stopped.

I haven't read the third part of the series through yet because you haven't finished it. I want to wait for the emotional roller coaster that will be. ^^

please up date its agood story

WHY!? *cries* Please continue!

I am absolutely hooked on this story! I read the first two parts and just can't get enough! I'd like you to email me at akkirby@wichita.edu when you update it. thanks.