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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't.....stand it. Need......more! This piece is very well written. Great characters, great tone, splendid descriptions and action pictures. Please writer more. You have talent and it's addicting.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im so hooked onto this story its not funny...its gone beyond a joke now LoL
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
You updated, ^___^ and 2 chapters .
Poor Jack, I hope they don't rape her, if someones is gonna touch her I hope is Riddick ^.^
Please update soon!
bye
dm
You updated, ^___^ and 2 chapters .
Poor Jack, I hope they don't rape her, if someones is gonna touch her I hope is Riddick ^.^
Please update soon!
bye
dm
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this is a great story! I can't wait for the next update!! You are awesomwe!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story and the other two before it! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love the way you've portrayed Riddick. He is doing exactly what someone would do to keep someone enslaved. Keeping her confused. Keep up the good work!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! The suspense is killing me....
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this trilogy!!! I am waiting for the rest, it keeps me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the awesome writing. J.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! a NEW! installation for the story, this is so cool. thanku and i cant wait till the next chapter