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by anisapologist

person Lusive
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did an absolutely beautiful job on this fic Anisapologist!

I would love to see more of this pairing in this style—sweet and sad but also erotic.

You could follow it through to later points in time (like maybe Anakin takes Obi Wan prisoner on the Deathstar (I think it was) instead of killing him)? Mm, and maybe Anakin would like to see Obi Wan hurting himself? Also, a little bit of after care from Anakin would be a really sweet clincher to see after all the agonizing emotions. :3 More more more more more!

I also believe I may have found a great song for this pairing too, encase you might get some more inspiration from that. :) Have you ever heard Wild is the Wind by Cat Power? It’s very slow and sweet and sad. It really makes me think of this lovely pairing.
You can listen to it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MB5jWDSUVhw
And the lyrics are:
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Love me, love me
Say you do

Let me fly away
With you

We're creatures of the wind
Wild is the wind

Give me more than one caress
To satisfy this hungryness
We're creatures of the wind
Wild is the wind

You touch me
I hear the sound of mandolines
You kiss me
With your kiss my life begins

Like a leaf clings to a tree
Baby please cling to me
We're creatures of the wind
Wild is the wind

You touch me
I hear the sound of mandolins
And you kiss me
With your kiss my life begins

Love me, love me
Say you do

Let me fly away
With you
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More !!
person Siarra
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is an awesome fic. I love how well you wrote the emotional ambience of the story; the angst and the tragedy were nearly tangible. I also find your storyline a very interesting one, and very daring when looked from the canon side of things. All in all, this is a unique story and the way you leave some questions open for the reader to ponder upon is fantastic. A great reading experience for all fans of angsty slash.
person Anonyomous
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome Fic!!!! It's so tragic, but still awesome. Keep up the good work!
person Jen
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well anisapologist...I read your stuff over at LJ all the time and I love it to no end. You write dark better than any other fan ficcer out there, IMO...Keep it up and I will see you over at LJ!
person Dar
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Post again soon!