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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 is missing. Please post more soon. I am really enjoying this!!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Characterizations are right on, with a bit of youthful venom thrown into Fett. (I never agreed that Fett was "emotionless"-- he just controls them exceptionally well...until a woman is involved.) You write dialogue as well. Can't wait for more!!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I think you have a good and detailed start. Keep going with this.