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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like the premise and well written. But while I do enjoy some set up and think you need it for this particular setting, I would say you are taking too long to get to any action. I think you could have set up his escape and dealt with that in a few paragraphs even and moved onto him and Lisa. Personally, i hope he gets his bloody revenge on her.
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'd love to see more. :3
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. Keep up the good work :)
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do not usually comment on the stories I read since it requires more thought than I am usually able to give (due to the fact I usually only get to indulge in fan fiction late at night after I have finished all my chores and other duties of the day), but your story inspired me.
It has great promise; I hope you will continue it. Too many authors become discouraged due to no feedback, but just because someone does not have the time to comment does not mean that they are not reading and enjoying. You have chosen to write about a less popular movie, so you probably will not have as many comments as a Lord of the Rings fic or a Harry Potter fic will get. Remember because if this fact, every comment you do get is worth ten times one given to a fic in a more popular universe since the readers are scarcer, writers are scarcer and good fic is hard to find. Sorry if this does not make much sense, but I am very tired.
Good luck writing and I hope that I have inspired you to continue.
It has great promise; I hope you will continue it. Too many authors become discouraged due to no feedback, but just because someone does not have the time to comment does not mean that they are not reading and enjoying. You have chosen to write about a less popular movie, so you probably will not have as many comments as a Lord of the Rings fic or a Harry Potter fic will get. Remember because if this fact, every comment you do get is worth ten times one given to a fic in a more popular universe since the readers are scarcer, writers are scarcer and good fic is hard to find. Sorry if this does not make much sense, but I am very tired.
Good luck writing and I hope that I have inspired you to continue.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!
Good story!
Good plot, good charactertization of Jackson, good everything! I really can't wait for the next chapter.
-wants to see the Jacksontorutringeveryoneinhisrevengebwahahahaliekwoah- XD
Good story!
Good plot, good charactertization of Jackson, good everything! I really can't wait for the next chapter.
-wants to see the Jacksontorutringeveryoneinhisrevengebwahahahaliekwoah- XD
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I am a strong supporter of LisaxJackson...I do find this story interesting. It's nice to have something new for a change. I just hope it doesn't get toooooo gory. Anyway-good job so far.