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I LOOOOOOVE your Crane in this. So delightfully insane. However, it also makes me so sad to have read the first story and then this one and see the diffrerenc between the sane Crane and the crazed one.

And I couldn't for the life of me figure out what Weebles was until Crane said, "Weeble Wobble". XD

Dear god, you need to write more Scarecrow stories. All of Jonathan's dialog was great.

Loved this story, thanks for the good read. Keep up the good work.

-D.D.Darkwriter

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! it's amazing. I'd love to see their relationship go further. Maybe only Bruce can save Crane from Scarecrow? (I love that idea you created of them being seperated entities in one body). Rock on!

I love it.
But as I am a sucker for happy endings and romance, I think you should make like a third story and have them stay together.
I dunno, u write really good, it'll be awsome!!!

I'm afraid you've forced me to adore and worship you.....amazingly done, both parts. Characterization remains candid and mildly disturbing; they really are so delicious together. I'm horribly curious as to where this will go if you decide to continue it, and even if you do not, I would recommend it to anyone.

I must confess that one of my favorite lines from the second part was when Crane stated where Bruce's water came from, that single line possessed so much weight it was overwhelming....The strength and nature of the story itself gives the foundation for beautiful continuation, but simultaneously provides a fufilled but questioning conclusion(oxymorons, hoorah!).It leaves a delightfully bitter-sweet optimism to savor long after being read.

A new fan to add to an undoubtedly long list,
Nacht

Oh, please make another one. I like the way you create a relationship between Jonathan and Bruce. Bruce could save Jonathan and have him living in the manor; helping with the Bat-gear (hint hint). Anyway, pleeease make more.

I love this series!! You've got to keep it going. I love how you write Crane and Bruce. Please keep going!

-april

this is really good. i hope you continue with it. i liked the first one too,ijust never got around to reviewing ^_^

Yay! A sequel! I swear, I had just finished 'In Their Element' and was so craving more! Then I found this! Hot as ever, (both Johnathan and Bruce, hehe ~_^) And this ficcy youleft off at another suspenseful part as well.... so maybe another part to it perhaps? Heh.

Wow. These were great. Hot, made my brain short circuit. Although this one, the second, was really great. It was well written, esp. Bruce's desire to just comfort and heal Jonathan, and Batman's desire to capture him. Very good. Excellent writing. I'm off to read more of your fics. You're very talented.