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for Forbidden

by Raythe

person Bluumberry
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking back for months now, hoping and waiting for an update. I was afraid you weren't even going to continue anymore. Many authors of these kinds of stories suddenly go "Oh god what have I been writing?!" and discontinue. I'm glad to see you haven't done so.

I'm still in love with your characterisation. It's a real pleasure to read the characters interact. The plotis also moving along, though I personally like reading about the relationships more than seeing the plot move ^^''

I just hope we won't ahve to wait so long for the next part <3
person reinrose82
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait to see where you're going with it.
It's rare for a fanfic to hold my attention this long, but I'm still
on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for more!
person snarryvader81
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I read it before, and now I'm rereading it for about the fifth time. Luke/Vader is my favorite pairing in Star Wars!!
Really great story! Keep up the good work.


-snarryvader81 (aka Anna)
person laica
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it trully do please update soon
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squee* I'm so glad you updated, and while the wait drove me bonkers, it was definitely worth it. Heheh, candle wax...aww, yeah.

What with the plot-ness that's so near at hand, I hope those two still find time to have their fun, whether it be on the nifty spaceship or Tatooine, heh.

Keep up the fabulous work!
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I got all tingly when I saw that you had updated.

Aw, I totally loved Daddy!Vader's devotion to Luke, even before he was born; he certainly is an evil genius, but erotic nonetheless.

Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for next time!
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals* I lurve you! I saw this, and actually squealed, and did a happy dance in my chair.

I loved the bit between Vader and Luke in the beginning. Of course, the smex was most excellent like normal.....kinda makes me wonder just where you come up with this stuff...scary =P of course, now I am going to be eyeballin all my candles and wonder if they make them with aphrodisiacs mixed in......pervy, hehe.


Glad your back, look forward to seeing what happens on the Deathstryke
person Samantha
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just want to let you know that I love your work, but I miss getting to read an exciting new chapter. On WWOMB, you said that you would update again in October, but you didn't. Whatever the reason, I can't wait to see a new chapter of Forbidden whenever your ready to supply us with one.
Thanks and good luck,
Samantha
person a.sa
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love your story Forbidden its a dream come true, a Vader/Luke story that is a rare thing I have only found another but yours the best, but dont tell me that Vader and master Gin are going to end together I beg you dont destroy the paring of Vader and Luke, you made ther love so real that I can imagem it onde movie. This story is may favorite but if you break up Luke and Vader or make Vader betray Luke with Master Gin it Will ruin the story for me.
Your the author so you now best its just may opinion as a reader.
Your`s the frist story that I review for 2 resons: 1º In Portugues and make a lot of mistakes reweting, I red and talk very wel but tha is all I can do, so sorry for the mistakes; 2ºI love your story and I just had to tell you that, and my opinion on the plot, I hope you can read this whit all the mistakes and that you thing about what I said about the love of Vader and Luke.
Thanks for the great story and I hope that wen you end this one you will start another Vader/Luke story, good ones are a pain in the ass to find!!!!
TRUST ME,I TRY TO FIND MORE THAN 2 AND FAIL!!! and Forbidden is the only good one!!!!!
a.sa
person Angela
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I think i just fell in love with vadar/luke *___* this is AWESOME. Hope you finish this and don't end up dropping it forever... ^^

Can't wait to see where you take this since i sense it is far from done.