AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Forbidden

by Raythe

person theozz
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rebel prisoner luke


so dirty so nasty so good!!
that was hot!
person IkeeeDay
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Wow. I just suddenly feel the need to tell you how awesome you are. LOVED this!!
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hay ,
person laica
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story love it. now vader has for some reason always been my favourite. update soon.
laica
person claire
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope the "elder sith" will appear once more XD
person Bluumberry
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter certainly filled my expectations ^^ Qui-Gon's exact feelings are still left in the dark but I have a feeling not for that long.
Since this unraveling of the "past" of Anakin and Qui-Gon I can't help but ponder upon Luke's reaction to the archive. I hope this will be revealed soon.
I especially liked how you handled Luke's point of view and how Anakin is dealing with the situation the three of them find themselves in now.
I had many more things to say but seem to have forgotten them ^^ The writing was of spectacular quality as always and I hope to read more soon! Very addictive <3
person answers
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so would not care if qui gon died. he seems to be cracking on to vader even though luke loves him so much, not even regretful about it. the audacity!

i love luke, he was all fragile and childlike in this chapter, and so typically luke with how he felt bad about them but didn't want to say anything.

it was really good, thanks for updating!
person Sere
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please say that there isn't going to be any more betraying going on between Qui-Gon and Vader, (kissing, touching, more) and that Qui-Gon doesn't really want that and doesn't plan to do anything that might harm Luke. Pllleeeeeaaaaasssssseeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I can't stand the thought of it, and yet Qui-Gon definitely seems to be leaning that way. Loved the chapter anyways though, I always enjoy them, but Luke has already been through enough, and is going to have to deal with even more, he doesn't need that type of betrayel from either one of them.
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What? A new chapter? So soon? How did I miss this?! O.O

Oh, my poor boys. *pets Luke and Vader* I am ACHING for an INTMATE father-son scene. *wink, wink* *nudge, nudge*

I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL.

After all the angst of the last chapter, it's nice to see the three of them starting to realize that they can be close with Luke having to worry anymore about Vader and Qui-Gon being intimate. They still have some issues, of course, but it'd be pretty boring if they didn't, heh.

Good job on getting this chapter up so fast, especially since it was pretty damn long! Can't wait til the next update! ^_^