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Great chapter and thanks for getting it out so fast! I love the way your plot development is so intricate,
yet it flows logically and continues to keep me in suspense. Eagerly waiting to see what happens next.

more, more, more, more more!! please!!

wow-
this was an intense chapter
i want to cry for luke and his deep fear of loss and being unworthy and
anakin and quigon-ahh

i can not wait for more---

great, great chapter

ooooh, they're leaving the executor in a fancy new toy - er, ship - back to tatooine where everything begins. fun adventures ahead. the tension between the three is really quite interesting; i especially want to see what this series of emotions between anakin and qui-gon goes and turns into. i didnt realize it till i read this new chapter, but the relationship you developed between luke and anakin was a subconscious reference for a couple of my character combinations in a new fic of mine. the way you've blended lover/teacher or student/relative dynamics into one relationship has intrigued me thru out this fic and inspired me to explore that kind of mixed dynamic and tension in my own writing. muchos kudos! cant wait for the next chapter!!

I have to say I've reread this story far too many times. That's an accomplishment for a story that isn't even complete.
I positively loved the new chapter. I was sitting at the edge of my chair because of my anxiousness. It filled all my expectations basically.
I'm filled with many questions now though. It is said that Anakin won't betray Luke, will this be so though? And what about Qui-Gon? The possibilities of what will happen and what might are endless. While I'm not really looking forward to a threesome being a solution, Ican't help but want all three of them to be happy.
I love your AnakinxLuke, but you also changed your awesome paternal (that has a new meaning after this chapter as well, I need to reread again) Qui-GonxAnakin into something I would enjoy reading as an individual story. I don't really know which pairing to like more now, and I feel slightly ashamed because of it, especially since I'm a person who only likes to read only one pairing per story.
So as you can see, you have put my brain in quite a jam. I am even more anxious now to see how this will evolve, but at the same timeI'm dreading the knowledge. I just hope you come to the best conclusion and I'm not disappointed by it ^^ Cheers for the brilliant read and offering to the fandom!

WOW. That was an impressive chapter. Poor guys, they're all so fucked up.

;_; Can't you just make them do a threesome and solve this dilemma?

oh i love this story i cant wait to read an update I'm really looking forward to it. ^_^

Whoa, this chapter was... I'm absolutely speechless as to how to describe it... And I just love Luke.

I can't WAIT until the next one.

i hate qui gon now, luke must feel so betrayed, even if his father has done anything yet, hes sorta thinking about. he must be really insecure as well, poor kid. plus theres no where he can go to escape it, on that artifical ship. just thinking about it makes me want to go feel real air on my face. anyway, i'm a total luke supporter, and i think this was another brilliant chapter. update soon!

I love this story SO MUCH!! It's the best fanfiction I've ever read. Your writing is wonderful, and amazing, and the plots you think of are so elaborate, and so creative, and just... genius! You rule, 100%. Totally.