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by Raythe

person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Thank you so much! *glomps*

Oh man, the images I got from this chapter were oh so sizzling. Luke and Vader are so cute together, and hot as well. ^-^

Argh, Palpatine is so DISGUSTING!!! Vader will never be his because Vader belongs to Luke and Luke alone! >.<

And I want to know what is the deal with Qui-Gon?! His role is rather ambiguous.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter(whenever that may be).
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods! You updated! Fantastic! I can't wait to see what you'll do next. Usually, I avoid incest fics but stumbled onto this one and was drawn in. Excellent writing and ideas. Please continue!
person Marie
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I only began reading this story a few days ago, but it's haunted me since then. I'm so happy that you've updated! The characters are OOC, but the plot and the slightly altered universe you've created are magnificent. This is a new fandom for me (I haven't even seen the newest three films), but there hasn't been anything I haven't understood; whatever aspects of canon you mention blend so well with the story that I don't feel as if I'm missing anything at all. An awesome work that I eagerly look forwardto reading more of!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:squeal:

I am SO glad you updated, and what a damn awesome chapter. Sexy and thrilling and everything I hoped for. I can't wait to see what's going to go down with the force-gang now...and can't wait to see Vader having Luke on the throne, heh.

That Palpatine is a bastard...
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vader, he can't catch a break! And palpatine is a royal sob. I can't wait for him to bite it. Well, I've got to run, I have to start my summer homework, outline half of my government textbook, start preparing a presentation on it, read 180 more by billy Collins, read the joy luck club and the poisonwood bible, and read/do a research paper on In Cold Blood. Oh well, I've a few hours on a plane to read it, so I'm pretty well set...

Loved the prison scene, but I'll have to reread it when mom isn't hovering...

God Bless,
Syndromia
person reinrose82
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Well worth the wait. Thank you thank you!
person deathscythe70
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are going to update soon, or you can e-mail it to me. lol
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd bug you about updating, but I'm not one to talk...I'm behind on updating a lot of my stories. :-/

But still...heh, hope you update soon. I've been waiting to see the end of that sexy cliffhanger for months now. ^_^
person reinrose82
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update? Come on, it's not nice to tease.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I'm not normally one for incest fics, but this one got me hooked instantly! Your writing is incredible, and I've been neglecting my uni work because of this story! My bad. :)

I've finished chapter 12, and I couldn't help noticing certain similarities between Vader's "wrecking havoc" scene with the scene in X3 where Jean Grey finally unleashes her Dark Phoenix powers. Was this intentional on your part?