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by Raythe

person Deliverance
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a fabulous story! I can't tell you how happy you've made me by writing such an complex, involving Luke/Vader epic. I haven't enjoyed a Star Wars fic this much in a very long time. I love that you've brought Qui-Gon back, and I really like the way you're using his character. I also like discussions about the Force and how to balance it. Oh, and the Luke/Vader moments are, ahem, nice too. ;-) I can't wait for the next installment!
person nimes
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooooooooo good! now. update!!!
person foxychibi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.m.g. I love it! I was wondering ('cause i'm a fanfiction.net member) if you could send me an e-mail when this is updated...I usually don't read these kind of fics, but this is really good!

keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of this later!

Foxychibi
person Shadows Run (penname)
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this all in one sitting. Amazing. Best Friday night I've had for a while. I like the force powers dynamic you've taken since a lot of fics focus only on the sex, which you don't, but your sex scenes are still to die for, btw. I really like that your bring Qui-Gon back and how you did it was awesome. Once again, the force powers part is really well done... Shiny... And those sex scenes, insane.
I can't wait for a new chappie!
Marvelous job.
person BalrogRobynne
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled onto this story by mistake. I accidentally clicked it, meaning to hit something else, then decided to read it anyways. Seventeen chapters later, I found myself completely captivated and wishing for more.

I really like this story. Ordinarily I'd be a little freaked out by the incest, but the quality of the writing and characterization just makes it work. And I love what you've done with the Force and the storyline. I think I like it better than the way things actually played out in the movies, honestly. *dodges rotten tomatoes*

In short? UPDATE, PLEASE! I really really really want to see the R.P.F.!
person Fallen
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay the first time I saw this paring for your story I wasn't going to read it but something told me to give it a try. I'm happy I did since the first chapther I have been hooked read all 17 chapters in two days just couldn't stop reading this excellent story. Love how you ended Chapter 17 (Luke's going to get it lol) and can't wait for the battle between Vader and Palpatine.

Keep up the great work now I'm off to read your other stories.
person Saph
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Started good, went to better, then got really intersting. Update soon please.
person claire
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh my what is gonna happen!?
person Dana
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I can't wait for the prison scene! I adore the detail you put into your writing! Keep up the great work!
person Reader_Mike
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far, I've been keeping an eye on it for awhile now waiting for you to update, now that you have I can't wait for the next ^.^ Especially the oh so nice encounter in the jail cell that luke will certainly enjoy ^.^