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by Raythe

person Sarah
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this is soooooooooo awesome!!! The way you write is just amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have two words. FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!! I found myself sitting on the edge of my chair throughout the entire story. It was like a movie playing in my head (which lets me know it's a damn good story). Please update soon!!!!!
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness... the kinkiness and smut... gah! XP Another awesome chapter with a terrible cliffhanger! ><
person Sawake
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. Like others, I don't normally read incest stories. But, after reading every obi/ani story I wanted more ani. This was an amazing surprise. I am hooked and want to read more! I really love how original it is but I it still feels connected to the original story. Please add more chapters!
person Marie
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a terrific chapter! I am so hooked on this story more and more. Great job!
person Silver
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really rare that I get caught up in fanfiction stories anymore to keep coming back, but this was just *amazing*. I seriously spent hours reading from the first to last chapter, into the wee hours of the morn. x3 You are a wonderful writer. You really portray emotions so well, and make even your really AU parts seem plausible. I'd never been a fan of VaderxLuke until this! And heavens knows you write hot love scenes ;3 I'm really looking forward to Vader and Luke getting into Luke's more obedient and submissive side >:3 Anxiously awaiting the next update! <33
person ScarletRaine13
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So i totally love your story and the sex was abosoultly amzing. i was like maga impressed. I must admit that i don't like Luke a whole lot and i haven;t read many Luke and Vader Stories but there is somthing about the way you write Lukes charater that makes him way more appealing then the moves did. Keep on writing and updating, love it so far!
ScarletRaine13
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how excited I got when I saw that you updated and my goodness! The lovemaking scene was so HOT! XD I can't even begin to imagine what's going to happen next. Squee!
person Explosivefruit911
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!This is amazing!Please update soon.I loove this pairing and wish there where more of this pairing out there.Aside from the few brave authors like you and your friend there are hardly any!If you find any good ones,(Other then your friends!That one was awesome by the way!!)please email me!i fully support you and hope theres a luke vader love fest next chapter!Chow!
person Marie
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was terrific. I am terribly hooked to this story even more now. Keep up the great work!