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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely incredible - you have such an amazing talent for writing; I adore all your stories although I'm glad that Guardian Devil is finished (or at least the first arc is) so that I can look forward to many [frequent] updates on Forbidden. Please, keep up the excellent work as the quality of your writing is practically unsurpassed on AFF (and yes, I'm gushing but I just realised that AFF was back up and so have gorged myself on two whole chapters of Forbidden and a promise of slash in the next one). Also - thank you so much for bring Qui Gon Jinn back: he'll make an amazing ally and doesn't feature nearly enough in fanfiction. As always, the story is gripping and I can't wait for the next part.
*Applauds*
~Loki
*Applauds*
~Loki
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luv youre fanfiction cant wait to see what happens next^^
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was such an AWESOME chapter! Qui-Gon's back! XD And now I don't like Obi-Wan or Leia. What?! But I'm beginning to get worried for Vader. I hope that nothing horrible happens to him, right? Right?! 0.0 Btw, I just love these long chapters! XD
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries in relief*
I am sooo happy that you updated. I had actually just checked AFF thinking 'Forbidden isn' t the only luke/ani story in existance, I'll just check this ou..t o.O'
YAY ^_^
It was sitting right at the top with that magical number eleven next to 'chapters'
I am sooo happy that you updated. I had actually just checked AFF thinking 'Forbidden isn' t the only luke/ani story in existance, I'll just check this ou..t o.O'
YAY ^_^
It was sitting right at the top with that magical number eleven next to 'chapters'
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I am so hooked on this now more than ever :)
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I am not really a big fan of Incest fictions. There are a rare handful that have drawn me to read...fewer still that I actually enjoyed the process of reading through. Being a...sort of "Old School" fan where Star Wars is concerned, I've had a lot of various fantasies revolving about Darth Vader and what he would be like or would do. (Same with Fett but that's a different story--always loved guys in cool armor for some reason.) I skipped over this fiction for several days, mainly because the idea of a Luke/Vader pairing was a turn-off. Being bored on a sleepless night however finally brought me to give it a shot and I clicked.
For once, I can't say as I regret reading an incest fiction. I read up to the latest Chapter, #10. Granted, to me it seems that both Vader and Luke are...very OOC in this fic, but...in a way that is fine. I can clearly see the connection/obsession between both of them in the movies and yes, it is rather plausible it would go so deep that it created another side to the Dark Lord and to the Jedi Knight that we did not see. Plausible thus acceptable.
As for their...relationship. It's a fresh take on it, something I'd never considered before so it is rather refreshing. The conflict inside Luke is good, as is your grasp of the roles you placed them into. That is excellent. And yet...I'm afraid I must agree with a previous comment I read. Luke does seem far too girly, helpless even in situations where he should show strength (referring to the struggles in the movies) and some form of intelligence to get himself out of trouble.
Having seen all three of the newest movies--and only really enjoying the third--I applaud your choice of restoring Vader to Anakin's youthful glory. Great touch with the personal features as well. Your idea of granting both of them such power is...new. I will have to read more into the chapters yet to come before I say anything more. Yet, I can say that I do agree Vader would likely have a far better grasp on the situation than Luke. Even in the movies the farm boy was slow to get things or ignored them, until forced to take a solid look at dire moments. You did manage to capture that fact very well.
So far, good fic. Different than what I'm used to but very well-written for what it is. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to more.
For once, I can't say as I regret reading an incest fiction. I read up to the latest Chapter, #10. Granted, to me it seems that both Vader and Luke are...very OOC in this fic, but...in a way that is fine. I can clearly see the connection/obsession between both of them in the movies and yes, it is rather plausible it would go so deep that it created another side to the Dark Lord and to the Jedi Knight that we did not see. Plausible thus acceptable.
As for their...relationship. It's a fresh take on it, something I'd never considered before so it is rather refreshing. The conflict inside Luke is good, as is your grasp of the roles you placed them into. That is excellent. And yet...I'm afraid I must agree with a previous comment I read. Luke does seem far too girly, helpless even in situations where he should show strength (referring to the struggles in the movies) and some form of intelligence to get himself out of trouble.
Having seen all three of the newest movies--and only really enjoying the third--I applaud your choice of restoring Vader to Anakin's youthful glory. Great touch with the personal features as well. Your idea of granting both of them such power is...new. I will have to read more into the chapters yet to come before I say anything more. Yet, I can say that I do agree Vader would likely have a far better grasp on the situation than Luke. Even in the movies the farm boy was slow to get things or ignored them, until forced to take a solid look at dire moments. You did manage to capture that fact very well.
So far, good fic. Different than what I'm used to but very well-written for what it is. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to more.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank the maker! A new chapter! And it was absolutely beautiful, but I'm worried for Luke now. >.> The suspense is killing me! >.< I just can't wait for the next chapter. XD
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June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was well worth the long wait! Great job cannot wait for the next chapter.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! you have a good story here and its nice and fresh. hope you continue writing in the future!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update now that there's a chance to do it! ><