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by Raythe

person Marie
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another terrific chapter I cannot wait for more!
person Azrael
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written. Good Luke and Vader fics are hard to come bye. You keep Vader in character which is good, no nancing Vader with peace signs and a tie die t-shirt which seems to be the product of some of these fics. Anyway please update soon it's a good story and plot line. (The Palpatine interference is interesting)
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a deity. I love this story...Hell I love all your stories, this one is the best though. Chapter Nine has a weird thing with the text, just an FYI. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!

~~Don't steal the government doesn't like competition.
person tenohikari
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm amazed - The story is very well written, and I loved the last two chapters with the Luke and Young Vader pairing um ... more please?
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i love all Luke x Vader story i would like it if there were more Luke x Vader story like this one update soon
person angelpred
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Miranda
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!
person ~L~
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals with delight!*
Please, oh please........more!!!!!!!
I found you fic by accident a few months ago and have been excedingly anxious for more. It is so beautiful!! I can't find any fiction which involves Luke/Anakin any where, well of course with the exception of Skywolves fic. Your fic is soooooooo enjoyable, so sweet. I just can't stop reading it over and over and over again. Please tell me you have more really soon, PLEASE!!!!!!! Sorry for all the pressure but you seem to be the only other one writing this incredible stuff.......don't stop!!!! Oh, Luke is something else!! And Anakin.....I can't see how he can hold himself back from just gobbling Luke up. Boy I would just cuddle the poor thing to death if O could. With all that strength, the height, the devilishly handsome looks of Anakin.......if I were he, I would so have my arms wrapped around that golden god of mine, Luke, all the time. Or have baby blue eyes tucked safely inside that long, swirly black cape with me.
Luke is so vulnerable. You character of him is simply mavelous. I love it!!!! I can so picture him. Longish blond hair, blue eyes so deep, that golden glow all over that thin frail looking body. And those looks, his hidden strength but he just screams he needs protection!!!! I am really lovin' it, and I really need more.........PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't get enough!!!!
~L~
person Loki
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic. It's such a shame this pairing is so rare...cos woah, it's hot. I love how you're progressing their 'relationship', and you've kept both characters very believable. I can't wait to see everyone else's reaction to Vader's new 'look'. Is he going to tell Luke his real name at some point? Oh, and I am anxiously awaiting the arrival of the smut, this chapter (8) has only whetted my appetite! Excellent writing and storyline!

~Loki
person Vampirezdarkgurl
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Every chapter leaves me wanting to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update again soon.