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by Raythe

schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All I can say is, wow. I have been reading this for the past week and I have got to say that I love it. I like it that you made the chapters super long and it takes a while to read. Espically for someone who works full time, school part time, the gym and life. I would hate to see this story die off without seeing the confrontation between Luke and his Father. Love it!
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well. That's it. I'm a goner. Had the biggest crush ever on Vader when I was a little girl, and I thought Luke was pretty hot stuff too, and the whole daddykink thing seriously blindsided me by being way hotter than it honestly has any right to be.

Oh god.

I can't wait for the update!
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story of yours and hope you can update it again ASAP.
person AmberSpirit
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I almost never write reviews but this story is just so incredible I have to let you know.
I found this story while I was in my Star Wars mood and just randomly went on youtube to see if there was anyone crazy enough to make a Vader/Luke music video. I found some which act as a trailer to this story and it had the link in it so I started to read it.
And I have to say-WOW. I am VERY impressed not only with the writing style but with the plot as well. The relationship betwen the two is so complex and deep it's incredible; my favourite parts are mostly the beginning ones because Luke is so perfect in his desperate atempts to not corrupt his father. I seriously love this story and would love to see any other Vader/Luke fics in the future. You are the best.
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice to hear that this story ain't abandoned. :-D

I can understand why it's hard to just go back to your "main story". High expectations, both on the part of the readers and yourself...hard to get back into the groove (happens to me when I go a month between my updates, lol)...well, don't worry, we'll be waiting patiently for it, heh. Better an awesome update in months than a rushed chapter in days, right? And the potential for more Luke/Vader stories (a very rare pairing on AFF) makes me a happy panda.

The fact that there are people still eagerly checking this story every day after more than a year without updates should be a testament to your skills. :-D
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously cannot wait for more of this. My email is there, so please email me when you put a new chapter up? Thank you! I LOVE this story!
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I was glad to finally find this story again, although I'm sad that it was never completed. I checked out your livejournal account, but could only find about three chapters of this fic posted. Is there a chance that you'll ever finish it? Or is it doomed to leave me hanging forever? I really do love this fic, which is funny, 'cause I'm not typically an avid reader of Star Wars fanfiction. If you have this posted anywhere else, please drop me an e-mail, so I can go and read more of this wonderful story. If you have moved away from it, either by choice or by necessity, then I understand that as well, and would be happy if you'd let me know either way. I hope that this review finds you in good health, and I look forward to hearing from you. Take care, Raythe.
person Nick
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I would be totally repulsed by the idea of incest. But this story actually makes sense! Please continue writing. Personally i am not a fan of the BDSM sections, but I understand it is necessary for character.
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A year after the last update, I still check this story every day for a new chapter, lol. The suspense is driving me mad...

Hope you haven't disappeared again or are having any more health issues. :-(
person Duskalia
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished your story and I don't know what to say! It's awesome.
I began to read two days ago and I'm now addict. It was my first VaderxLuke pairing and I found it odd at first. But you're really a good writer, I love it now. It's great that everything's not only about juste sex even if you rock at writting it lol
Hope to read more soon!