AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Forbidden

by Raythe

schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still checking in once a week...exercising patience,
just please don't abandon!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*puppy eyes* Am I hoping in vain for a threesome? I have such a crush on Qui-Gon. ^^
Well, either way I love the story. Brilliant piece of work. More chapters would make me very happy.
person Isaskar
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Hello

I really like this story I have read it many times over and I think it is the best story I have come across so far so please write some more, bretty please
I'm really geting desperade here

-Isaskar-
person Lavenderangel49
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Your ideas are well thought out and have such deep meanings. It remains true to the movie and characters yet puts an interesting twist on them too. It’s intriguing and has multiple mini-stories that run within the main story. I know that’s a difficult thing to do and keep track of and you’re handling them all very well. There are so many surprising turn of events that I can hardly stop reading. Also your writing itself is excellent. I can picture everything you write and understand the language of it.
I look forward to reading more!
person Nick
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it's not much, but it really impresses me how different of a tangent you take on the star wars story, and yet it is so correct and it works too. I see that you have been threatening not to continue writing this story anymore, but I beseech you to continue! My favorite idea in this story is that good and evil can and are supposed to coexist and that they are therefore relative concepts. This has long been a concept that I have held dear to my heart and the knowledge that someone else understands is quite comforting.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take all the time you need, but keep in mind that you're driving us crazy with waiting. :-D

When I load this story from my bookmarks and see a new chapter has been uploaded, I will seriously cry. Or get aroused. Depends on how easily Luke and Vader make up, lol.
person sarah
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best one I've read in a long time. I really hope you keep writing, it would be a shame if you stopped
person reinrose82
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been a long month. An update would just make
it all better. Please?
person ranni
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really dig this fic. I can't wait to see chapter 24 soon!
person LiardDestrier
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story so much it BUUUURRRNNNNS oh how it BURNS! But it has been a very long time since you updated! Could you at least let us know when you might have time to write more? I need my Inc-y goodness! Especially enjoy the Trans thing. I kept waiting for him to get drunk and rape Luke or something... ENOUGH OF ME! MORE OF YOU! Hopefully soon? *puppy eyes*