rate_review Reviews

I love this story so much. I just could not stop. The way you blend the fluff and angst, the plot and smut, is so well done. Many, many times I was left with my jaw open saying, "That did *not* just happen!" Oh, but it was so beautifully written. And with the angst and complications in the last couple of chapters, the make-up sex better be pretty dammed good, and I have no doubt in my mind that it will.
Jeez, I can't even stop talking about how awesome this is! I think my friends are kinda annoyed, but it's totally worth it.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Love you!
~Blue

Hi!

First, I never review to enybody ,yes I know I'am a very naughty reader, but even so I felt irresistable need to review to you.
Your story Forbidden is just so ... I cant find english word to describe it.. it's ...juicy. Good ,in this case, is just so lame word so I dont want to use it. I like the beginning of love triangle bitween Anakin, Luke and qui-gon jinn at least in my mind it seem like love triangle.
I also like your writting style it's clear, informative and hot.
Please write new chapter soon o__O'

-Isaskar-

ps: I'am from Finland so my grammar is horrible, don't mind it

Well, well, citizen Raythe, what can I say? ... I don't like Star Wars, I hate one-and-only-love stories, I am absolutly against the parent/child incest and yet here I am - a regular reader of your little dirty soap opera! You see, my situation is difficult and it's all your faut. A few final words - please, Please, PLEASE don't be so cruel with the poor Palpy - after all he's a evil twisted Vader-fan just like you ... And don't spoil Vader that much; I think he will enjoy a challenge.

Umm I kind of forgot to review this chapter, maybe it was because I was squirming in my seat after reading it for the first time?

I've just reread the story, AGAIN...and I can't get enough. You have such talent for writing, I'm practically green with envy.

I keep looking for a "new chapter" button only to find none :< This pairing doesn't get the love it deserves, so this story really is the only way to satisfy my need to read something for the pairing. Oh don't worry, even if there were others, this would surely be my favourite still. I just wish there was something new to read every day but alas, I guess I'll have to settle for the fact that at least you keep writing and hopefully won't discontinue at any point :x

I eagerly await the promised update this month!

I love the story and I'm waiting for you to finish it since I've ready all 23 chaps 5 times.

You have converted me. I'm officially a Star Wars fan. I decided to read your fic last night even though I have never seen even one Star Wars movie and I loved it. My mom is a big Star Wars fan so I know a few basic things about it, but not much. I read Guardian Devil and it is one of my most favorite fan fics out there. I'm thinking about buying all the Star Wars movies just so I can watch them now.

yay..an update. I have a feeling Damon is going to do something very bad..but i guess not everybody is well upen open minded..anyways..great job...please keep up the good work..and update(that is the most important thing). Im looking forward to your next chapter. take care. 8D

AH! I read your update to find its DEPRESSING!? Im SO upset right now! Dammit! Damon I HATE YOU! He ahd to ruin everything for them. but I guess learning something like that is a shock...I would be pretty damn shocked. I like how Joran made it all better. He is really cute! Well Im glad you updated! I love this story. I do wonder though just how they will work out the love triangle. Well anyways thanks for the update! Please more soon!

I was so happy to see you had updated! I feel really sorry for Luke in this chapter. He can't let Vader kill everyone just to keep them safe but he can't stop Vader seeing that as a betrayal either. I like how you show Vader's vulnerability, how even though he loves Luke he's still scared that he's tainting him somehow. It was great that Luke stood up and declared their relationship and wasn't ashamed to admit they were together. Damon sounds dangerous, like a religious fanatic who totally believes in his cause. Thanks for the great chapter, sorry about the long rambling review!

Damn, you're not seriously leaving it there, are you? What a cliffhanger!

Though I don't like it when Luke and Anakin are... divided, I do enjoy it when Luke makes use of his capabilities and proves that he is more then just a level head. While his abilities to revive and heal are extraordinary, it's nice to see Luke stand up for himself, even if it was towards his father. Though I would have preferred that he was more firm towards Damon. He just doesn't seem to get it, does he. Well, I'm sure whatever evil plot that Damon is concocting with be thwarted especially since he was nearly pulverized already. Silly man.

Very much so looking forward to the next chapter,
Lady D