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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! So many emotions, both good and bad, but that was an EXCELLENT chapter; very much worth waiting for.
Keep up the GREAT work!
Keep up the GREAT work!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one white-hot chapter! I can't wait for the next one, although I'm a little worried about what may come---especially with Damon. I got a bad feeling about him and whatever his vow was...
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Updates! Good stuff; knew there was something coming with Trans. I can't
wait to see where this goes. And speaking of Leia...what's Obi-wan up to?
Can't wait to see he and Qui-gon meeting again. If that happens that is.
Resist Writer's Block. Update soon!
wait to see where this goes. And speaking of Leia...what's Obi-wan up to?
Can't wait to see he and Qui-gon meeting again. If that happens that is.
Resist Writer's Block. Update soon!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
totally and completly AWESOME
wow what an intense chapter
i am so hoping for another chapter soon
wow!!!!!
wow what an intense chapter
i am so hoping for another chapter soon
wow!!!!!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite Fan Fictions. Just thought you'd like to know. It's pretty hard to get into my top ten, considering I've read more fan fictions than I can count, but this story is definitely in my top five. Keep it up!
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you are still working on this story, it's my favorite SW fic, what can I say I got a kink for incest ::grin::
just a side note, while I was re-re-re-reading this the hit counter came up as Hits: 21666.... mwahahahahah
just a side note, while I was re-re-re-reading this the hit counter came up as Hits: 21666.... mwahahahahah
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg...........i'm always needing a mop and a bucket after reading this fic XD
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated, YAY! Gosh, I was losing hope here. But it was definitely worth the waiting. It is one of the best chapters in the fic so far (although all chapters are utterly awesome). I loved the way Vader admitted how he wanted a real human being for a father instead the divinity of the force-birth. Poor Anakin. *sigh*
I do not understand one thing, though. Why does he not talk about Lea at all? Even when he talked about the pregnant Padme, all he mentioned was Lea. What had she done even as an unborn baby to deserve such total lack of attention from him?
I do not understand one thing, though. Why does he not talk about Lea at all? Even when he talked about the pregnant Padme, all he mentioned was Lea. What had she done even as an unborn baby to deserve such total lack of attention from him?
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I was so preoccupied in my musings about Vader's issues with Lea that I forgot to type the rest of my review before hittin enter.
I loved the sex-scene. To be honest, at first I wanted the spanking scene to happen, but the hot wax was a brilliant twist and you described it incredibly sexily.
Btw, I am probably the only fan of your story who actually WANTS it to become a Qui-Gon/Anakin/Luke fic. It would be lovely if you go down that road. And hot too.
I loved the sex-scene. To be honest, at first I wanted the spanking scene to happen, but the hot wax was a brilliant twist and you described it incredibly sexily.
Btw, I am probably the only fan of your story who actually WANTS it to become a Qui-Gon/Anakin/Luke fic. It would be lovely if you go down that road. And hot too.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tried to review this over at wwomb but can't seem to review there. Anyway I'm so happy you updated and this chapter is really hot. I love Luke 'disobeying' Vader like that. Its great to see them so comfortable together. I'm also glad that Qui-gon wasn't in this chapter, was worrying that you were turning it into a Vader/Qui story. Can't wait to read more.