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for False Dawn

by Chriscent

person Ash
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! Riddick's a fucking ZOMBIE!!! What the hell?!?
person Brandi
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this story is damn good. Can't wait to read more. It reminds me a little of The Apprentice, by Ardath Rehka. Sounds like you'd probably really like that one. Can you send me an email when you update?
person Ash
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story, I absoulutely love it! I can't wait for the next update. I hope you get the chance to post a new chapter soon. ^_^
person Doomsday
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Thanks a bunch for writing it. I hope you're able to update more often now that the site's up and running. It was great how you would always post a new chapter every three days. It was kind of refreshing to have an author that was reliable.
person tracy
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing. more more more. a little baby riddick. oh and how is riddick going to take the fact that trow spend monthes trying to seduce our jackie?
stand back CI they come to get their baby back.

i love the story and cant ait for the next chapter.
person ash
schedule March 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you can update now
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fucking awesome
person Dee
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. As you said, Riddick does seem a little bit soft but I still totaly love this story. I can't wait to hear more from you. Keep up the great work.
person FitMama
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, but I love this story. I think the reunion with Jack and Riddick was perfect. I'm glad she didn't delay very long telling him the truth about their son. Can't wait for the next chapter--hope they reconcile some more as they figure out how to get the baby back.
person lily
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stellar piece of writing as usual from you! Please keep going, I was so happy with the way your last story ended, i'm looking forward to this entire story a lot!!