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for False Dawn

by Chriscent

person eryn
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't hate him Jack!!!!! lol - you know your characters are great when people talk to them instead of you lol. Seriously though, this was a really great chapter i could feel the emotions rushing between the two of them. I hope she doesn't end up hating him, he kills himself a little everyday for leaving her there and he really loves her. Only a matter of time before he loves that baby just as much. You know I almost feel sorry for CI cause there won't be much left when these two are done.
person S
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update........im glad that she agreed to let riddick sign on with them.....i bet hes gonna be great help!!! i cant wait for more~
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
person lee
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was harsh, when are you gonna have her tell him about the baby?
person Avidreader
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!!! She can't be mad at him, not now that they found each other again!! Please update soon!!!
person S
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH how can she be such a bitch to him???? i think she should tell riddick what she is trying to do, how shes trying to get their son back...i think he would definitly help.....

wow.....that was a great update! i cant wait to read more!!
person Rogue212
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I love this story! Thank you for making Jacks character strong and independent, I can't stand when people make her all weak and stupid. Please update asap. I cant wait.
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
person Eryn
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes He's Back!!!!!! I'll hazard a guess that the two she didn't kill, he did. Now they'll go get thier baby back together!!
person S
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ALRIGHT about damn time Riddick showed up!! I cant wait to see what happenes between jack and riddick!!
Update real soon!!