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for False Dawn

by Chriscent

person Evelynn
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! Riddick came back! I love the story! Can't wait for the next update!
person Eryn
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew that kid was alive!!!! I'm so glad to see the real Jack back, she's ready to fight and I love it. She'll need Riddick on this though, although how she'll find him I have no idea. Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.
person S
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew her son was probably alive! great update, gave us all kinds of good stuff!!! please update soon!!
person rebel1203
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update soon!!!
person S
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice update!! I'm glad someone still remembers her! now where is riddick? lol
person Sandy
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh great googly moogly i do love this fic.
person S
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE say that riddick comes back into this story and soon! lol i wonder if riddick has been searching for jack or if he will still like her? great update, I cant wait for more!
person ratatosk
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack. Poor, Poor, Jack. You've done a wonderful job of drawing the characters in a believable fashion. Especially Jack, so unmoored from any origin, any, place to be. Just doing the best she can under the circumstances.

I want Riddick to swoop her up, as much as I resist that ending.

good work.
person redplanet
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been lurking since your first chapter, but I just have to say this was a DAMN FINE chapter. Not that the others haven't been, but this was excellent writing. Thanks, and keep it up.
person S
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that she turned Trow down.....great update! please tell me that riddick has been atleast looking for her this whole time!

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