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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work! You've managed to get the point of the story across very well without resorting to vulgar sexual termonology like so many stories do! Bravo!!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not being a Star Wars fan myself, I had wandered into the Stars Wars section of AFF. While browsing through the summaries, I came across your story and I thought I'd check it out. I must say that I quite enjoyed reading it. I wouldn't consider your work as smut (I find the word too vulgar) but more rather erotica (though non-consensual sex can hardly be considered erotica by most). I hope you will not mind my having saved it for re-reading in the future. Well done! ;)
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One thing I forgot to add is that I am sorry if my liking your story might've offended you, remembering that it was based on your dream and I assume the heroine (or victim) is you. But truly, your story is quite better than most stories I have read :)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I would be scared after that dream 0.0 very good story!I hope to see more of your work in the furture ^-^
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i realy loved this fic .wow that was a crazy dream you had i hope to have one but with obiwan insted of darth maul and with a happy ending. please continue this fic .
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Essie, even though you spelled "woman" wrong, doesn't mean you won't get reviews. Me, I like the story or dream ,but at the
end of your dream, WHOA!!! NOW THAT'S FREAKY. If you think about writing ch. 2, please update it soon and if you don't get
no reviews because of your spelling, then that's stupid. I'll keep you posted if that makes you feel better. KEEP SMILING!!!
I know this is a dream that you had, but I have to say this. I'M SO SORRY!!!!
end of your dream, WHOA!!! NOW THAT'S FREAKY. If you think about writing ch. 2, please update it soon and if you don't get
no reviews because of your spelling, then that's stupid. I'll keep you posted if that makes you feel better. KEEP SMILING!!!
I know this is a dream that you had, but I have to say this. I'M SO SORRY!!!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you want whose "Anon" is that's me.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story so far. You've portrayed Mauls actions perfectly as a dominating Sith Lord. I hope you will continue with many more chapters to come.......
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You spelled woman wrong in your summary. Just a hint: Most people will not want to read or review a story where the author spells words wrong right from the get go.