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for Puzzle box

by darkangel985

person Hollis
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...Strangely enough, this would make a lot of sense. They never did say what Rick did, but shagging with Jon would be considered "looking for a good time" to me. Lovely piece, nicely written, not terribly discriptive yet with enough to give you the image. Brilliant all over. Hope the rest of you work, whatever they are, will be this wonderful.
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting twist on what happen. Cool story.
=)
person Karumera
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, it's great, and explains well on the whole thing, how they had said he just wanted a good time.. and Jon's puzzle box was Rick's.. lovely.
person Ally-Chan
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! that explains alot lol yeah i could so see that happening. poor Rick...he always gets the short end of the stick! very nice
person -rock
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more!

I'd love to see more Rick/Jonathan stuff out there
person TheSummoningDark
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Hehehe...I always wondered why Jon was so nervous about seeing Rick again... (Hmm...my thoughts are taking me towards a very interesting AU)
person attirb
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A really good idea to explain how the puzzel box got in Jon's hands and how Rick got into jail!
person Sheri
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just ran across this and WOW! It's Sheri saying "hello" and to let you know I'm supporting your story here at Adultfanfiction.net! I rarely come here and haven't been here in AGES, but I saw your story and was thrilled! Yay! You know I love this and I'm waiting anxiously, hoping, that one day you'll do another Jonathan slash fic! I'd love to see him get hurt so he can be comforted!

I don't remember, but do you like the Jonathan/Ardeth pairing? I do, but I'm open to anything! I hope you are well and everything is going your way!

Huge Hugs!

Sheri
person frank
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well then there now...that was quite sexy, wasn't it?
person Racoona
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoah!! No wonder Rick punched Johnathan in the face when they met at the prison!!! Go you, this fic rocked... and me thinks that you'll find heaps of people hwo agree^_^ I just hope you get more reviews than little ol' me. You know... I know youll get more reviews, who could not review such a bloody fantastic peace of fan fiction?? Me thinks that me should dtop rambling, me says bye "Bye" *turns off intercom*....piiiiiiiiiiiip