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for To small

by 1animefreak3

person The Summoning Dark
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck!?!?!
person Diz
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this just an insult to Star Wars fans? Or do you really think it's funny? If you're trying to be insulting, that's juvenile. And if it's supposed to be funny, it's really not. I suspect you are about fourteen years old and should not be on this site.
person April
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...

Is this supposed to be a parody of some kind?
person Dru
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The words 'This sucks' come to mind.
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should be ashamed....not funny...please try again...
person Kay
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps when you write an actual story, we might be willing to give some comments.
person dancingnaked
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
???

I'm just not sure what to say.

P.S. T-o-o small. Not t-o.
person duckhat
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't use a script format and put some more effort into it and it might be funny.