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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW WHAT A GREAT STORY!!! I really hope you continue it! It will be sooo sad to see another great fic die :(
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you're going to continue this, it's been fun so far.
i would have shot the bugger too. lol.
i would have shot the bugger too. lol.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I remember reading the book and hating how it seemed to leave things up in the air when it ended. I think you're doing a better job than the authors. (Sorry Perry!!)
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I quite like this- I hope you'll update soon...
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!! MORE!!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC STORY!!
Characters, detail and flow amazing. Really like the slower pacing, I don’t mean I think the story is dragging, far from it, it’s GREAT, just that you’re not rushing into the Xeno scene, you’re building up from the bond they share. This makes me look forward to it more… Please continue! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Characters, detail and flow amazing. Really like the slower pacing, I don’t mean I think the story is dragging, far from it, it’s GREAT, just that you’re not rushing into the Xeno scene, you’re building up from the bond they share. This makes me look forward to it more… Please continue! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please, pretty please with the sugar on top? :-)
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up!! Some action please!!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! Now! =D Keep up the splendid work, it's an excellent story.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say....WoW! I love it! I love predator fiction,unfortunately there is not alot to be found. I so hope that you continue the story and that yes...um...uh.."mating" will be involved. So sue me,I'm a sucker for interspecies relationships. I think the plot so far is very action oriented and very visually descriptive. Done very well. I love it when reading a story you have enough description to visualize yourself in the situation that is occuring. Please feed my addiction and update soon. keep up the great work!