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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was simply wow. The characterisation, the plot developmensts... Bravo! I'm totally hooked up and I hope there will be more soon!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters, the language you use is very pleasant to read, I really like your writing style. Update soon, cliffhangers make me go crazy... =D
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah most people call paragraphs chapters, you have CHAPTERS .GOOD CHAPTERS!! I have not read the alien verses predator book Prey but you make me want to. If you keep going i'll keep reading and giving feed back GReat work Lorna
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ME again i didnot mean to put my story on top. I had a typo and I think its stupid that if you change a word you go to the top. GReat story and sorry SMiles