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WooT!

Now the honeymoon, right??

OMG! I've been following this story for ages, I love it! GO Mara and Luke!

I really like how you've bought them together, its in character and so sweet!

Can't wait to see more!

Oh, the games they play.

I really just love their chemistry, but it kills me everytime Mara leaves Luke.

Update soon!

Ah, another wonderful installment to the series. I was wondering how you were going to get these two together without them both looking pathetic--but you succeeded marvelously. Luke getting dumped by Callista the night after he cheated, but not having him search out Mara was good. Plus having Luke remorseful and admitting his actions were wrong helped your readers to forgive his previous transgressions. The fact that Mara only came to him to drop off medications also showed that she was resolved not to be the other woman.

The sex between he two was a little more subdued than in the first few stories, but that can be expected. Their last time together brought them both much grief. I think it is telling that Mara kissed him after she told him ‘no kissing if it is just sex’. So does that mean she wants this to be more than sex? I guess so, since she changed the rules. But I think she is still fooling herself with this new arrangement. I think she wants more than a ‘friends with benefits’ arrangement. I know it is more than sex to her because she is not thinking just about herself. She loves the look on his face… the sound of his voice. She genuinely loves the man.

I can’t wait to see the next chapter. Will it be “One Night on Jade’s Fire”?

Again, your progression was done very well. This seemed sweet, but not quite as much emotion. It seems they're getting more comfortable with the idea. I'm wondering if your mention of non-exclusiveness was for dialog purposes or a precursor to later things...jealousy being one of them. I only wish that other site was working...the lengthy discussion over 'Coruscant' was very interesting. Can't wait for 'One Night on the Jade's Fire.' Somehow I think emotion will be on the rise again once they realize what they've gotten themselves into.

Yet another marvilous chapter in this series. One question remained to me, why did Luke have that whip, or did Mara plant it there, and if so when lol. I enjoyed Mara's roughing up Calista idea, she's a bitch diserves to get a thrashing from someone. If its Mara all the hotter. Next time please don't keep us waiting so long. Oh and my name is Myn Donos not Myn Dynos lol. Interestingly enough its one of my favorite star wars chars and a member of Rogue Squadron. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I like the situation, but the first chapter was a bit too cold and technical to be genuinely erotic, with too specific description of what went where, and not really enough emotion or rhythm of language. It might be 'only sex' but it can still be passionate and sensual.
I hope you take that constructively, because youre not a bad writer at all, I just think you need to work on your style and tone. Perhaps the next chapters are sexier.

Update!! Please... no really. I love this. It's wonderful, and hot and sexy and wow. Just make Luke beg.. After that last chapter, he needs to beg.

WHOOOHOOOO!!! That was wonderful, erotic, amazing and it made me want to reach for my vibrator!

Oh, Luke really needs to dump the bodysnatcher and get to some more bootknocking with Mara!!! Excellent story! Very hot, hot, hot!!!