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for "One Night" Series

by DMSandArica

person Myn Donos
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm Loving what I'm reading however I would love to see Luke break Callie's heart, mostily because I hate her with the passion of a thousand sun's. Also having Mirax was aswome, her and Corran are my favorite, next to Luke and Mara. Hehe it would also be neat to see an apearence of Face/Dia, Myn/Lara, or Wedge/Iella. Please keep up the good work, if I can ever help with a beta it would be my pleasure to do so.
person Rian Sage
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Whoa* (fanning self) I really like how you've progressed their attitudes in tune with their sexual behavior in these. The obvious feelings at the end of the third to the turmoil they're in now. I'm glad to see Luke honest with himself and Mara in denial. I find that true to character. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one.
person Dar
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more! Excellent!
person purebristles
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent stuff, and too hot, just too hot...
person kayladie
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you already know how much I love this series! And after what you told me might be coming up in the next one, I can't wait to see that one either. *wink*

I love how Luke and Mara are so raunchy in these tales. It's gotta be nice to just forget you're the Jedi Master and the former Emperor's Hand for a while, hmm?

The kiss at the end of the Kuat one was wonderful, though, so tender and sweet. Luke and Mara were just destined to fall in love if you ask me, although I like the way they've decided to take advantage of their mutual attraction for a while first in this AU, hehehe!

More soon!!!
person DMS
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this series. When are we going to see more? More!!! LOL. Great job!
person Myn Donos
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the greatest series of Luke and Mara fanfiction I have ever read to date! I was taken away by how well you got their behavior so accurate. I can tell that you've read the book's and I say thank god for that. Their are too many stories over the new movies, or the movies in general. Its very rare for me to find a good Luke and Mara story out there. I've read your three stories multiple times and can't wait for the next. Also I think its great that you've been a Star Wars fan for 28 years now, I've been one since the age of 5, and its stayed with me all the years. Also i've noticed your reading the Dark Nest trilogy, i guessed due to the whole tickle test that was in your second story One Night on Yavin, was in Dark Nest: The Joiner King. I'm interested in hearing your opinion on where the star wars timeline is heading. Please contact me via e-mail (first time i've actually have posted it online because of someones stories).
P.S. If you recognise my name then I'll be very impressed, and you'll then be my favorite fanfic writer next to Ash Darklighter on FF.net.