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for Intricate Circles

by AlchemistSeraph

person Shan
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit confused with how he could reach....but Batman voyeur, oooh, I like!
person gohan
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. and u totally need a sequel
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Trippy. And contortionist Jonathan! I hadn't thought about that, before. This was quite a lot of fun to read. ^_^ And the ending.. Heh.. I hope there's a sequel in progress.

Just one thing. His last name's spelled Crane.

Otherwise.. Great job.
person Alice
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Damn, twisted and erotic. And the appearence of Batman at the end makes me want a sequel. Very good.