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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. You're awesome. ^_^
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this! I could feel the tension throughout the entire thing and the ending!...wow, so frustrating yet...
I also like the way you wrote it, in a lot of stories I've read it gets repetitive but I couldn't read yours fast enough!
I also like the way you wrote it, in a lot of stories I've read it gets repetitive but I couldn't read yours fast enough!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'No one forces Jack Sparrow into staying' CAPTAIN! CAPTAIN! lol, loved it.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! is this just the one chapter? please no!!! i update soon! i love it! i really did! the whole mystery of "the game" thing! Your smut is excellently written and it was so heartbreaking at the end :( please continue this i beg of you :D
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By God . . . that was one of the most amazing pieces of sinful literature I have ever read. Bless you and may you be worshiped as a saint.
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! i adored it! i loved it! that was just wonderful and i just want to go find lil jack and hug him and tell him "it was just a story, don't worry! i still love ya!" lol, did i mention i loved it?!? XD
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...my goodness.
I swear you read my mind with this story.
I always told myself that if, in some implausible way, I ever met Jack Sparrow, I'd play hard to get. I'd make him work if he wanted me.
And I never imagined it could turn that way.
The ending is one of the most beautiful things I have ever seen in three years of reading fanfiction.
Thank you.
I swear you read my mind with this story.
I always told myself that if, in some implausible way, I ever met Jack Sparrow, I'd play hard to get. I'd make him work if he wanted me.
And I never imagined it could turn that way.
The ending is one of the most beautiful things I have ever seen in three years of reading fanfiction.
Thank you.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate hate hate hate hate hate HATE het.
However your story was absolutely brilliant, it was sexy without being sleazy and it was beautifully written.
It was fantastic.
However your story was absolutely brilliant, it was sexy without being sleazy and it was beautifully written.
It was fantastic.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Post MORE! Post MORE! *puppy eyes*
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February 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! There were a few minor errors, but I think that's more the formatting of the website. I pity the woman foolish enough to turn down Captain Jack Sparrow!
My only negative feedback would be, why sex on a dresser? What if it was badly made and collapsed? Or wasn't treated? Splinters in the arse, cruel and unusual punishment. OUCH!
It was very well-written, though.
Congrats on a good job!
My only negative feedback would be, why sex on a dresser? What if it was badly made and collapsed? Or wasn't treated? Splinters in the arse, cruel and unusual punishment. OUCH!
It was very well-written, though.
Congrats on a good job!